There are only plants today. The mosquitoes were blown away early. Love bugs hold each other in hiding. Dragonflies think themselves into sticks. Even the ants are gone. A lone chameleon bobs on the mango tree, tapping out a prophecy in morse code.
The birds of paradise are fluttering, flapping furiously to keep watch. Their shocking reds and oranges fly like flares heralding the coming of the wind. The grass is shivering, even though it is already May. Frangipani leaves begin to poke their heads out of stiff branches. They are still not convinced the time has come. They expected to be welcomed with showers and lightning — a thunderous cry to expose themselves. But they know they have been waiting too long. The angel’s trumpets have been calling, sending long fluted noted which start green and fresh and explode in screeching upside-down pink. The sounds coax the palms to dance, a primitive hallucination of a trance, a dance to tempt the clouds. Australian pines cry out as they sway, painfully praising the wind that moves them. The bougainvilleas are silent.
The mother mango listens and alone is still. She is weighted by the pregnancy of dozens of offspring, ready to feed. Her tiny flowers quiver and the beat of the shaman lizard plays on. Clouds move more quickly, as if gathering round to hear. The wind becomes more forceful, swaying the mangoes lasciviously. The angel’s trumpets begin to wail; the frangipanis gawk unashamed; the palms quicken to a frenzied dance; birds of paradise hold tightly to their stalks; Australian pines scream “halleluiahs” to the wind.
And just as suddenly it ends. A small patch of silent azure breaks over the tree, baptizing and cooling her. The chameleon hugs the trunk, exhausted by the omens. And slowly, as if gravity is lazy, thousands of white mango flowers drift to the ground. Floating like snow, winking like stars, swirling like Sufis. Hundreds of daughters never grown. Millions of mouths never fed.
Your use of language is so lovely, and draws upon all of the senses. I enjoy reading your lyrical style.
I enjoyed the precision of your drawing. Is it yours also? You “liked” a post I did for a class assignment. Trying to figure out how you got to our class blog… just curious.
Thanks. The drawing is mine, yes. I found the class blog under the writing topic and thought that your prompt was a nice thought-experiment (:
This is beautiful writing. Your words are like brush strokes creating a picture.
This writing is a gift – thank you.
Thanks for reading!
Love this story and the picture. You have a poetic way with words. Thank you for sharing.
This is so beautiful and yet so poiganant. Keep it up. Loved it.
Thank you for the encouragement, quratzafar!
I saw the drawing and skipped to the last paragraph of the post. Just judging by that paragraph alone, I felt no need to read those that came before it. That’s how good it was. More, please…