I was born as lightning struck the Atlantic, during an unseasonable January thunderstorm. The whole thing had groupers and houndfish cocking their heads to the side in unfamiliar motions. The ocean was sky blue and clear, but the sky was choppy with swells. Raindrops fell from the sea into the clouds. The Sargasso Sea paused its churning, leaving seaweed suspended without shores. Eel larvae hatched all at once and bathed in the stillness as turtle hatchlings poked their heads above the waves to watch. The sea sang siren songs to Ayacayia, who delivered me to my mermother. The bottle-nosed friends of my father gathered round to congratulate and speed along the loggerhead who bore me to the shore.
I landed on the islands among sea biscuits and beach glass. My sargassum hair held mermaids’ purses and unborn sharks. My skin sparkled with the pink sand that held centuries of periwinkle dust. Queen conchs and horse conchs alike exploded with the pink noise of the oceans they held, sending coral-colored stars into the sky. As the dawn came, yellow hibiscus opened gently, turning orange and deepening into red before falling into the ocean, in a microcosmic mimicry of the sun. Inland, you could hear potcakes howling at the strangeness of the winterstorm and roosters who could no longer tell the time of day. Hermit crabs came together to perform a junkanoo, which raised me from my sleep. I had always been able to swim, but it was time to begin to leave footprints in the sand.
That’s lovely. I’ve always liked the idea of mermaids.
Your prose is lovely and lyrical. Have you ever heard the song called “Silkie” by Joan Baez? This piece made me think of it. I enjoy your style, and I am from Florida.
wow. what a sense of drama! great imagery and anticipation in every sentence. beautiful.
Thanks, Mike (:
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Lovely imagery here, absolutely lovely.
I particularly like the line about Roosters who could no longer tell the time of day.
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Your writing shows striking originality.
Very nice – the whole piece has an ebbing and flowing, ethereal quality to it – thanks for sharing.
Great stuff. Thanks for making your presence know to me.
yes, yes, yes, yes, yes… and more yes.
Terrific piece. Loved the surreal feel and the way it seems almost possible.